Copy revisions: business/team over shop, moves on, de-gate Canadian, pricing honesty
- "build it into the business"; shop -> business/team across copy (office/shop divide kept only in the disambiguating hero eyebrow); fab-stations aside removed - "heads for the door" -> "moves on" (covers retirement and loss) - Audience de-gated: "for Manufacturers" (Canadian dropped from title, descriptions, audienceType, results intro, OG card, llms.txt); areaServed now Canada + US; identity stays (Proudly Canadian, BC base, Canadian hosting option) - Discovery session: "Fixed fee, agreed up front — and if a project follows, it comes off the bill"; About no longer promises free need-it-or-not judgment (that's the discovery session's job, recommendation yours to keep either way) - Fit list: "or an AI pilot project ... no pilots that quietly die in IT" - OG card re-rendered Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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<text x="82" y="280" font-family="'DM Sans', system-ui, sans-serif" font-size="21" letter-spacing="4" fill="#7a6f5d">FOR CANADIAN MANUFACTURERS WITH PRODUCTION SHOPS</text>
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<text x="82" y="280" font-family="'DM Sans', system-ui, sans-serif" font-size="21" letter-spacing="4" fill="#7a6f5d">FOR MANUFACTURERS WITH PRODUCTION SHOPS</text>
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<text x="78" y="362" font-family="'DM Serif Display', Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif" font-size="66" fill="#0f1729">Your best people are retiring.</text>
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