Copy revisions: business/team over shop, moves on, de-gate Canadian, pricing honesty

- "build it into the business"; shop -> business/team across copy (office/shop
  divide kept only in the disambiguating hero eyebrow); fab-stations aside removed
- "heads for the door" -> "moves on" (covers retirement and loss)
- Audience de-gated: "for Manufacturers" (Canadian dropped from title, descriptions,
  audienceType, results intro, OG card, llms.txt); areaServed now Canada + US;
  identity stays (Proudly Canadian, BC base, Canadian hosting option)
- Discovery session: "Fixed fee, agreed up front — and if a project follows, it
  comes off the bill"; About no longer promises free need-it-or-not judgment
  (that's the discovery session's job, recommendation yours to keep either way)
- Fit list: "or an AI pilot project ... no pilots that quietly die in IT"
- OG card re-rendered

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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<text x="82" y="280" font-family="'DM Sans', system-ui, sans-serif" font-size="21" letter-spacing="4" fill="#7a6f5d">FOR CANADIAN MANUFACTURERS WITH PRODUCTION SHOPS</text>
<text x="82" y="280" font-family="'DM Sans', system-ui, sans-serif" font-size="21" letter-spacing="4" fill="#7a6f5d">FOR MANUFACTURERS WITH PRODUCTION SHOPS</text>
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<text x="78" y="362" font-family="'DM Serif Display', Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif" font-size="66" fill="#0f1729">Your best people are retiring.</text>

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