From e123d4251bde573dea2bcc417ff9ad57f30a8ee0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Victory Date: Tue, 7 Jul 2026 07:47:32 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Copy revisions: business/team over shop, moves on, de-gate Canadian, pricing honesty MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit - "build it into the business"; shop -> business/team across copy (office/shop divide kept only in the disambiguating hero eyebrow); fab-stations aside removed - "heads for the door" -> "moves on" (covers retirement and loss) - Audience de-gated: "for Manufacturers" (Canadian dropped from title, descriptions, audienceType, results intro, OG card, llms.txt); areaServed now Canada + US; identity stays (Proudly Canadian, BC base, Canadian hosting option) - Discovery session: "Fixed fee, agreed up front — and if a project follows, it comes off the bill"; About no longer promises free need-it-or-not judgment (that's the discovery session's job, recommendation yours to keep either way) - Fit list: "or an AI pilot project ... no pilots that quietly die in IT" - OG card re-rendered Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 --- continuity-audit.html | 12 +++++------ index.html | 46 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- llms.txt | 6 +++--- og-card.png | Bin 57730 -> 57535 bytes og-card.svg | 2 +- 5 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-) diff --git a/continuity-audit.html b/continuity-audit.html index b1ec251..86cdccb 100644 --- a/continuity-audit.html +++ b/continuity-audit.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ The Continuity Audit | ShopWisdom - + @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ - +