Copy revisions: business/team over shop, moves on, de-gate Canadian, pricing honesty

- "build it into the business"; shop -> business/team across copy (office/shop
  divide kept only in the disambiguating hero eyebrow); fab-stations aside removed
- "heads for the door" -> "moves on" (covers retirement and loss)
- Audience de-gated: "for Manufacturers" (Canadian dropped from title, descriptions,
  audienceType, results intro, OG card, llms.txt); areaServed now Canada + US;
  identity stays (Proudly Canadian, BC base, Canadian hosting option)
- Discovery session: "Fixed fee, agreed up front — and if a project follows, it
  comes off the bill"; About no longer promises free need-it-or-not judgment
  (that's the discovery session's job, recommendation yours to keep either way)
- Fit list: "or an AI pilot project ... no pilots that quietly die in IT"
- OG card re-rendered

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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<p class="eyebrow">Start here · a fixed&#8209;fee diagnostic</p>
<h1>Find out exactly where your shop is <em>exposed.</em></h1>
<h1>Find out exactly where your business is <em>exposed.</em></h1>
<p class="lead">The Continuity Audit is the first step: a clear, honest read on whose knowledge your business depends on — and what it would cost you to lose them.</p>
<div class="actions">
<a class="btn" href="https://cal.shopwisdom.ca/michaelvictory/20-min-shop-wise-meeting" data-cal-link="michaelvictory/20-min-shop-wise-meeting" data-cal-origin="https://cal.shopwisdom.ca" data-cal-config='{"theme":"light"}'>Book a fit call — free, no pitch</a>
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<h2>See where you <em>stand.</em></h2>
<p>Start with a free fit call. Describe your shop — even roughly — and we'll figure out whether an audit makes sense for you.</p>
<p>Start with a free fit call. Describe your business — even roughly — and we'll figure out whether an audit makes sense for you.</p>
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<a class="btn" href="https://cal.shopwisdom.ca/michaelvictory/20-min-shop-wise-meeting" data-cal-link="michaelvictory/20-min-shop-wise-meeting" data-cal-origin="https://cal.shopwisdom.ca" data-cal-config='{"theme":"light"}'>Book a fit call</a>
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